We Are Stars

I have a dream

Inside my head

The Sun is butter

And the Earth is bread

The trees are candy

The water’s tea

It keeps on flowing

For eternity

The plants broccoli

And the sky is meat

The shops are flowing

With your favourite treats

The buildings are chocolate

But they make me fat

Volcanoes erupt milk

Yes, we all want that!

Clouds are marshmallows

And the birds are sweets

The grass is toffee,

Your favourite eat

Candyfloss is the moon at night

And the planets are tasty too

But stars will always remain stars

Because they’re me and you.

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Charlotte Pattison's picture

wow. is about all i can say. wow. that is so cool and , well i just love it!

Danniel Lennax's picture

Dear Terri,

Nicely put...
Very imaginative...I like the fact that you see these things with the eyes that God gave you...and the mind to interpret it this way.

The world needs more like you.Young,sweet,and just the right amount of innocense. You are refreshing.

Your Friend,
Danniel

PS
I have a few more on my site if you're interested.

Betty Hattersley's picture

Bravo Terri! I loved this poem, it is fantastic. I wrote onecalled A Sweet Poem and it reminded me of it. I loved your ending though, it was far better than mine.