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Predator
Forest green, and in the leaves
Hides a pair of eyes,
Waiting to attack their prey,
Waiting in disguise.
Leaping through the trees and then
Stopping in their track,
Suddenly, a predator,
Waiting to attack.
Forest green, and in the leaves
Hides a pair of eyes,
Waiting to attack their prey,
Waiting in disguise.
Leaping through the trees and then
Stopping in their track,
Suddenly, a predator,
Waiting to attack.
quick and to the point. I like
i must admit terri, you are a great poet. like i said @ school, you are going to become something great. but then again you alresdy are
I think that this poem is very lifelike (real) and it is one that I will recomend to others
Quick, catchy and chilling - absolutely excellent, I LOVE this one. It's fantastic, well done. HOW did you come up with this???????????????
hiya terri i think this poem has a good rhythm i think its short and snappy