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Teenagers
Teenagers should enjoy life
And savour every day
Instead of crying, moaning, groaning
When things don’t go their way
An education for example
Makes later life a joy
Tips the scale to drink and drugs
And any living boy
What good will designer clothes do you?
Apart from drain your wealth
And cigarettes that make you choke
Drain away your health
Teenagers should enjoy life
And savour every day
Instead of crying, moaning, groaning
When things don’t go their way
This poem displays good meter, and brings forth a good message. I really enjoyed reading it, and a number of your other poems, as well. I am fairly new here and reading a lot of the posts to get an idea of what type of things I should be writing. The efforts you have displayed, (in my own personal oppinion), are some of the best ones I have run across so far. Keep up the good work!!
new_wave_franky
LOVIN IT!!! ace poem terri, i've wrote a poem on teenagers recently but you really hit the spot here. well done on your ryming technique, and i know i've said it before but i'd love to be able to ryme and flow at the same time! cool poem.
Wow, im loving this. It's so true. <3
haha! thats funny i like that! lol!
cool poem! well done!
heehee
ME LIKE!!!! this is wot i try to do a lot, just enjoy the life thati have, although i cant always i do try, perhaps a certain sam ' o woe-us my life is a hell hole' jenkinson should have a look at this!!!! GD poem as usual tez xXx