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Lost Warrior

I feel cold inside causing a vibration vibe.
I see the Darkness creeping in like a moonless sky.
My world seems silent like a cold wintersnight.
I lay on the battlefield all alone with no more fight.
A hero without his side kick, a warrior without his honor.
How do you fight when there is no more fight?
The rivers are running dry, the crops will soon die.
A man Reaps what he sows so I'm told.



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©17 January 2012 - 11:36pm — poet610
1 February 2012 - 12:33pm — heatherburns35
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lost warrior

Hi 610 poet, you are surely not a lost warrior. you have fought many battles and have won the fight.
this makes you strong and defiant. you are just in a lull, but the fight will return. alone never, God is
by your side, guiding the way. Just listen to his still voice. the river will flood again, and the crops will
reap a healthy harvest. Just you wait and see. these little battles in life make us more determined to
win the race. keep on writing your lovely poetry. this is a God given gift. take care of it and use it.
heather

18 January 2012 - 11:34pm — jpstheophany
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great simple poem

enjoyed reading it, and I feel your loneliness...

26 January 2012 - 10:50pm — poet610
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Thanks

Thansk for taking the time to read and comment.
610

18 January 2012 - 12:05am — osiriss-
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i

enjoyed this --- keep up the good work!

"A hero without his side kick, a warrior without his honor."

solid words from a solid author --- thank you

18 January 2012 - 12:16am — poet610
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Thank you

Thank you my friend, it was something i just put together in 5 mins while at work lol.
going to fix it up later i think.
610