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Together We Ride

Some fight and some die, some just give up and not even try.
Some survive and others will die, the warriors will be known for the braveness they have shown.
I ask you my lover to be a warrior by my side and together we will ride.
Take my hand and to the battle grounds we’ll go and together we will stand.
Battling the cold and battling the warm, we’ll conquer all because together we sworn.
Our vows our weapon our lessons learnt is our strategies and our offspring our victory.
Together forever was a vow and happiness our trophy.

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to my wife

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©29 December 2011 - 10:43pm — poet610
9 February 2012 - 10:48am — facethetruth2b
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true

Having children is a victory and Staying together the years adding up is a trophy , Stand for what you believe in having someone else stand with you makes you strongewr .. Great write ...

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

16 May 2012 - 2:38am — poet610
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makes you stronger

Yes for sure it does. thanks for taking the time to read and your comment. sorry been out of the game for a while

9 February 2012 - 11:00am — SSmoothie
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Sing it sister!

True dat!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

16 May 2012 - 2:39am — poet610
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thanks

Thanks for the comment. hoping to try and get back into my normal routine soon

30 December 2011 - 2:48am — heatherburns35
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poem

two is stronger than one.
nice poem for your wife.
Marriage is all about sharing.
your offspring is your victory.

30 December 2011 - 2:52am — poet610
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Thanks

Thank you very much i'm glad the reader was able to understand what i was talking about.
but you are the wise one hahaha.
Thanks very much for your comments
610

30 December 2011 - 6:35pm — heatherburns35
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sharing

When there is a child involved in a marriage, I do believe
both mother and father should give it their best shot.
Both should do everything in their power to make a happy
home for their child. I understand exactly what you are
saying. nice work. hbw keep writing.

30 December 2011 - 8:44pm — poet610
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it is sad

it's said that not everyone thinks of such things

30 December 2011 - 8:48pm — heatherburns35
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sharing

Hi 610, that is so true. But that's what is wrong with
this world today. so many little kids without parents
and a home. People think of them selves not their
children. enough said. have a great day. hbw