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Unbeaten Path

I have died so many years ago.
Why am I still here I do not know.
I have been walking this unbeaten path for many years but all I find is despair.
Not only is my path unbeaten but it begins to go up hill.
A man lost in darkness, looking for faith to set him free.
Why is it that God turned his back on me?
Why did you not answer when I asked to be set free.
Now I am left to wander around this land, am I insane or is life just an unfair game?
While the lightning strikes in the distance I hear a voice say.
Son, faith is yours to have you just need to believe each and every day.
I have always been right in front of you, you are the one that turned and walked away.

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©21 November 2011 - 12:11am — poet610
19 March 2012 - 8:36pm — facethetruth2b
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I think and also ask the same

I think and also ask the same questions ' Why did God turn his back on me?" That life is nothing more than for it to be unfair..But then I think I am the one being unfair I am the one that turned my back towards God.. He loves us all , and he gives us only what we can handle.. We go through ups and downs alot through life but it his way to test us On Keeping our FAITH... Great Write enjoyed the read..

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

21 March 2012 - 12:39am — poet610
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Why did God turn his back on me

Thanks for sharing.
I'm at that same stage now i think.
Starting to understand things more.
trying to always see the positive.
i'm sure has you know sometimes this is hard.
Thanks for caring and being a friend.
610

22 November 2011 - 11:57pm — facethetruth2b
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beatiful the way you put it ,

beatiful the way you put it , I can relate to this , keep up the beatiful writting ..

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

23 November 2011 - 12:01am — poet610
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Thanks

Thank you very much, and thanks for taking the time to comment

21 November 2011 - 1:14am — heatherburns35
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unbeaten path

I am sure there is times when we all feel like this.
So many events happen in life to make us feel
we walk alone. But there is always a light at
the end of the tunnel. I ask God to help me in
my daily walk. And keep the faith. You write
about life and it's sorrows so well. great piece.
heather

21 November 2011 - 2:57am — poet610
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thanks

thank you for your kind words.

21 November 2011 - 12:44am — kerry
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Powerful

This is a powerful poem - and it builds to its climax so well. : Happy to find your portfolio :)

kerry

 

http://kerrybrennan007.blogspot.ca

21 November 2011 - 12:59am — poet610
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Thanks

Thanks for taking the time and reading.