The Darkness

The time to sleep

The time to rest

Not for all

Thoughts revealing

Flooding the mainframe

Invading the Peacefulness

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This might be a work in progress......not sure yet

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grimfate's picture

simple and effective

 

I just had to say its got power and if you do expand it it has some potental. As it is, it is short and sharp smthing i struggle to create but love to read.

keep it up

 


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

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reply to the reply of a reply to the reply to the comment

 

 

Lol it just made me laugh is all XD

sorry for being silly.


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

pnklvr's picture

Thank you, I appreciate your

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. I like it short, but at the same time, it feels like I could expand.  

allets's picture

The "Mainframe"

If you expand it, I hope you do not abandon the "virtual computer world" suggested by mainframe. Been a long time since I wrote a love poem to my computer. My Muse has put his foot down, he's next or else :D ~ Lady A
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Thank you for the feedback.  

Thank you for the feedback.