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Bash Her
She said I bashed her triumphantly,
As I was lying down next to she,
Yes I did pummel and cryed relief,
From this shadowed black widow thief,
That bestalled the recovery of my man,
In the sistyer I understand,
Who has in meantimes her innards ripped,
That so the widow on me trip.
And morrie the style to get her there,
My heart it seldom wants the pare,
But I must grasp the passing peach,
To keep the pear quite out of reach.
(c)R.H.Elliott 2004
Richetti,What an elephant piece of art, that is like a JAVA program,with all the properties..
keep in contact and writting mate
LICO,
Freddy.
Federico
Fred
FedeMart.
etc.
etc
heavensunrise
This reads and looks like a sonnet… now, that was probably not your intent.
Nevertheless, the playful rhyme here gives the piece great rhythm. The images bounce off the page as one reads them in parallel to their rhyming couplets.
Written beautifully, although the story's sad.