Once a man, swallowed the sea,
It wasn’t you and I reckon, not me,
For if we had we would have found,
It too difficult to travel to town.
I once accidentally swallowed a weir,
‘Twas lucky my Aunty was standing near,
For I was wading in, mucking about,
And she dove in and pushed it out.
The sun sometimes, swallows a lake,
And we pray for rain for someone’s sake,
As the rain it comes with a mighty plod,
Then we pray that it would stop.
I saw a man who had swallowed a dam,
Allot of people still don’t understand,
But He was put on a tree for three days,
And poked in hope that it ran away.
Another time, I swallowed a bath,
As I thought, it was the last,
But some men they dried and dressed me down,
And gave me to wear, a strange coloured gown.
I finally learnt to swallow a cup,
Of clean and pure, unadulterated stuff,
That may not be grand nor vast nor full,
But in moderation is, the golden rule.
©Richard.H.Elliott 2003
The rhyming here creates an almost sing-along rhythm. I just love the metaphors in this, the piece speaks true on a variety of levels. I also admire how you managed to incorporate yourself into it at the end.
A job (definitely) well done!!!