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Puff, puff, puff.

Puff, Puff, Blow.

Well, Puff, puff, Really?

I didn't, Puff, Know!



©R.H.Elliott 1996

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yes I know one shouldn't for the various health risks to others and themselves. Yet in the hazy brown-grey of a city, let's face it, it couldn't make that much difference. Unless of course you only breathed out.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:24am
©4 May 2003 - 1:28pm — pluguan
2 September 2003 - 8:44pm — Athalia Lystra (not verified)
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Ohhh! Just brilliant. Simply brilliant.

I like your blunt honesty of 'it couldn't really make much of a difference anyway.'

I repeat; brilliant!

22 June 2003 - 4:21pm — gentle
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Nice imagery..

Could see the whole picture through the haze of grey, smell the aroma of tobacco & hear the rhythm of the breathe.

amy

Gentle is the night♥