Image again the Possible, For sleep may come, Again and again, To Soothe the Reality of Sin, In the Sin of Reality.
A comma is like a rest one takes to catch the breath, I was placed in coma narrowly missing death.
I liked this. Very unique poem.
It sounds ominous, a call to wake up. Got the idea sleep was death, reincarnation implied. You don't really need the semi-colon, but a comma would do.
I liked this. Very unique poem.
It sounds ominous, a call to wake up. Got the idea sleep was death, reincarnation implied. You don't really need the semi-colon, but a comma would do.