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Image again the Possible,

    For sleep may come,

Again and again,

    To Soothe the Reality of Sin,

In the Sin of Reality.




Author's Notes/Comments: 

A comma is like a rest one takes to catch the breath, I was placed in coma narrowly missing death.

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Rachelle Wiegand's picture

I liked this. Very unique poem.

Marty's picture

It sounds ominous, a call to wake up. Got the idea sleep was death, reincarnation implied. You don't really need the semi-colon, but a comma would do.