Dedicated to Lauren Glass
Your like an angel
Standing tall
Your like a tower
That will never fall
You have more beauty
Than the eye can see
And to all who ask
I will agree,
Your are like a dove
Innocent and true
And that is why
I want to be with you
I really liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I'd really appreciate it if you would look at my poems, give me your oppinions about them and give me some pointers to improve my writing.
Beautiful work....