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Who Knew?

I may have not known,
but somewhere in my heart
I could feel it all.
The songs you sung,
the poems you wrote,
the amazing steps you danced.
The grace of which
you painted my face with smiles.
Those times when you were strong,
or weak, when saying goodbye.
I knew it was driving you crazy.
Your dreams were mine,
that should be no surprise.
So who was it that fell for whom.

© 2010 Philip N. Carcione

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Thanks to Vilma Zaballero for pushing me to write this.

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last updated 25 December 2010 - 5:04pm
©4 October 2010 - 5:19pm — phil_carcione
5 November 2010 - 8:53pm — sanctus
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Poignant.

Poignant.

19 November 2010 - 9:47pm — phil_carcione
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Thanks

Thanks

2 November 2010 - 1:39pm — vilmazab
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When my poems are answered,

When my poems are answered, it is as if I have arrived, maybe not being a good poet but just as someone being read. Then it inspires me, brings me to write more,maybe not all my poems will be answered,but one out of my hundreds, is good enough..Thank you too Phil,this poem will be treasured.

19 November 2010 - 9:47pm — phil_carcione
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I though yours needed someone

I thought yours needed someone to answer it.