Fear

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Fear

pounding in my chest
breath exhaled but cannot breath
a squirt in my pant

 

© 2010 Philip N. Carcione

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Senryu

Most popular definition, but there is more to senryu than meets the eye:

Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.

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You say quite a lot in so

You say quite a lot in so very few words. Bravo!

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I had no choice with this

I had no choice with this form......lol