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Reflection in the light,
certainly is quite a sight.
One might think it is perfection.
In the light, reflection.

Many things we can see in there,
though beautiful, be aware.
Sometimes what we see has strings,
we can see in there many things.

Do not walk into a wall,
you may suffer a great fall.
Move slowly taking stock,
into a wall do not walk.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Swap Quatrain.......

The Swap Quatrain was created by Lorraine M. Kanter.......

Within the Swap Quatrain each stanza in the poem must be a quatrain (four lines) where the first line is reversed in the fourth line. In addition, line 2 must rhyme with line 1, and line 3 must rhyme with line 4 and so on, BUT not repeat the same rhyming pattern on subsequent stanzas........

Rhyming pattern: AABB, CCDD, and so on.

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last updated 13 October 2010 - 10:47pm
©19 August 2010 - 9:05pm — phil_carcione
7 December 2010 - 12:35am — heatherburns35
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not always what it seems....

when you stop and think about it, what is as it seems? Not much these days....great writing as usual...

have a happy holiday eason....2010......heather  your still one of the best.)