Death Toll

Folder: 
2010 Poetry



Fifteen Hundred dead and counting,

Pakistan mourning their people.

Monsoons pouring down,

flooding the land and taking life.

Bad enough they have to live

with militants taking their lives,

now the damage to the infrastructure

hinders relief efforts.

While disease begins to take it’s toll.




Author's Notes/Comments: 


Free Verse


Free Verse is an irregular form of poetry in which the content free of traditional rules of versification, (freedom from fixed meter or rhyme).


In moving from line to line, the poet's main consideration is where to insert line breaks. Some ways of doing this include breaking the line where there is a natural pause or at a point of suspense for the reader.


Following the direction of Walt Whitman, Ezra Pound and T.S.Eliot, many modern day poets use this particular form of expression.

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sanctus's picture

How very poignant. And what a

How very poignant. And what a pleasure to discover your work. Respectfully written, but let's be honest, there are not many poets on these sites. It is nice to have discovered a fellow artist!

phil_carcione's picture

Thanks so much for your kind

Thanks so much for your kind words.