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Moonlight glistening off the cresting sea,

together with a balmy breeze.

Rhythm of the night with just you and me,

majestic in varying degrees.

Carmel in its scent of hinted tea,

loving you wishing not to displease.

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Harrisham Rhyme


Harrisham Rhyme, created by the female poet, Harrisham Minhas, belonging to the State of Punjab
in India, of a six-line rhyming stanza. In this form, the last alphabet of the first word of each line is the
first alphabet of the first word of next line.


There is no restriction on the starting alphabet of the first line.


Rhyming scheme : ababab.

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©7 July 2009 - 12:34am — phil_carcione
7 July 2009 - 12:39am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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this piece reminds me of when cap and I go to the mill and stand at ponds edge in the late evening moonlight. so romantic. I can really envision it. Great piece Phil!