“UP” beat

Folder: 
2008 Poetry



Life is wearing me down, finances, work and other such things.

I must look for the upbeat, things that make me want more and more.

Hmm, let me see what will work .....  I got It ..... sex, that’s the ticket!




Author's Notes/Comments: 


Sijo


(the word is both singular and plural)


Sijo is traditionally composed in three lines of
14-16 syllables each, totaling between 44-46 syllables.


A pause breaks each line approximately in the middle;
it resembles a caesura but is not based on metrics.


Each half-line contains 6-9 syllables; the last half of the final line is
often shorter than the rest, but should contain no fewer than 5 syllables.


The Sijo may be narrative or thematic,
introducing a situation or problem in line 1,
development or "turn" in line 2,
and resolution in line 3.


The first half of the final line employs a "twist": a surprise of meaning, sound, tone or other device.
The Sijo is often more lyrical, subjective and personal than haiku,
and the final line can take a profound, witty, humorous or proverbial turn.


Like haiku, Sijo has a strong basis in nature,
but, unlike that genre, it frequently employs
metaphors, symbols, puns, allusions and similar word play.

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