Morning Wait

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2009 Poetry



Morning brew I must slowly sip,

this ritual I can not skip.

I wait and wait, I keep my grip

I hear it drip, I hear it drip.




Author's Notes/Comments: 


Monotetra


The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines
in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes
the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated.
It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.


Stanza Structure:


Line 1: 8 syllables; A1

Line 2: 8 syllables; A2

Line 3: 8 syllables; A3

Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4

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heatherburns35's picture

I like this one alot. Very cute.
I like how you explain your
poetry. Very smart.

Heather

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I can relate to the morning coffee. So how you doing Phil? I moved so living with ex to be and grandson. total nightmare . Leave any messages in my guest book

new_wave_franky's picture

I dig it!! Great stuff here. It could also serve as a cool chorus for a song, dude!!

new_wave_franky