You rested your head beneath the evergreen
Fixed your eyes on the lights which blinked and beamed
Tinsel touching and tickling your face
Blown glass bulbs mirror your purity and grace
Sweet thoughts entertained and musing paraded
Eyes are fixated and mind captivated
You excitedly smile and hug yourself tight
In the glow of the warmth of the bright-colored lights
With limitless faith in what you believe
Waiting in wonder for the gifts you'll receive
The magic of melting into someone's embrace
When a sense of contentment shows in your face
Your eyes are closed as your heart rate slows
And sleep overcomes you as you sweetly dose
Endorphins escape into your bloodstream
And breathing is soft as you longingly dream
Your thoughts move and marry in subtle waves
It's impossible to dictate how your thoughts behave
What thoughts are you thinking and joys are you drinking
What memories are linking while your consciousness is sinking
If I caress your pure loveliness
Will you confess or must I guess
Shall I be blessed or do I jest
Am I doomed to ponder your ambiguousness
Do you dream of the times you felt most secure
When you crept across the bedroom floor
As morning light brightened the sheets of your bed
Touching the tresses which blanket your head
Warm loving smells rise up from the kitchen
You eagerly surrender in easy submission
You creep down the stairs approaching the table
With your nose overcome with honey and maple
Steaming stacks of pancakes and plump sausage links
Moist butter and syrup and cider to drink
You inhale the aroma and whisper a prayer
Your heart snaps a picture for a souvenir
Then arms hug your neck as a kiss tickles your cheek
A nose nuzzles your hair as a tender voice speaks
Good morning, darling, were your dreams full of play
Were they washed with the wishes you made for today
oh my god... you're an
oh my god... you're an absolute genius
Wow! Thank you very very
Wow! Thank you very very much! :D
Your Poetry.
Truly a Wordsmith Peter. You have a gift with words that could make one to be envious. Well done I do not often cooment but your work is exceptionally good. Best wishes from Bern
Thank you very very much,
Thank you very very much, Sir. Hearing that from you really makes me feel humbled. I wish I had your imagination though. Your writing blows my mind with its' great twists and imagery. :)
A wonderful write. A total
A wonderful write. A total joy to read.
Thank you very very much!! :D
Thank you very very much!! :D
This poem was deeply inspired by this movie.
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Wow is all I can say Dear Peter. What happened to your Facebook
Wow is all I can say Dear Peter. BTW What happened to your Facebook friend request ? ~Your pal bishu~
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Oh, do you have a profile on
Oh, do you have a profile on Facebook? This is me: https://www.facebook.com/peter.c.raymond
Thank you Mr Peter I've just sent you a friend request on FB
Thank you Mr Peter I've just sent you a friend request on FB
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Thank you, Bishu!! :D
Thank you, Bishu!! :D