If we just sat together for a while
I'd search your soul and find your smile
You look so warm in your denim overalls
Pink socks and sneakers dangling from the wall
Rocking back and forth in fading light
Ever rolling playfully and dreaming of tonight
Long thick hair swaying and framing your face
In your girlish smile the years are erased
You leap to the ground and extend your arms
Dusk reflects off your necklace charm
You wrap a little child in your embrace
Pulling him close with no empty space
Dancing gently over hopscotch chalk marks
Watching with wonder the firefly sparks
I tenderly touch your shoulder
With my other hand on your waist
The ocean sparkles and grows colder
We sway as the Beach Boys CD plays
Vanilla Coke foaming in pitchers
Clusters of friends posing for pictures
Hot dogs and buns on barbecue grills
The air is warm and the wind is still
I look in your eyes so wide and delighted
Your laughter is sweet and so excited
With you I'm gentle as I can be
Like a porcelain doll I hold you gingerly
As we dance silhouetted against the water
I'm mindful that you're God's daughter
I like to walk with you in and out of arcades
Chewing steaming pretzels and sipping lemonade
Wearing friendship bracelets and novelty rings
The precious pleasure of hearing you sing
The plastic teddy bears you snap on to your hair
Whipping light sticks in the aromatic air
Wonderful really enjoyed
Wonderful really enjoyed your poem. A very good read.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you very very much!! :D
Thank you very very much!! :D
brilliant
brilliant
Thank you very very much,
Thank you very very much, Millyardo! :D
Young love summed up
Young love summed up perfectly. I love it. You painted a picture of how you feel about this woman, and it's just pleasant to read. Bravo!
"A poem is never finished, only abandoned" - Paul Valery
Thank you very very much,
Thank you very very much, Joarge! :)
A beautifull poem so
A beautifull poem so lovingly written and so sentimental. I liked how the small things in life please you and your detailed account of your intimate thoughts. I enjoyed reading this poem very much, lovely creative write the rhyming is wonderfull too.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you very much, A.
Thank you very much, A. Griffiths!! It means so very much coming from you. I so much enjoy your evocative portraits of childhood. :)
Reading my poem in the wee
Reading my poem in the wee small hours of the morning.
Sorry , I missed the video Peter
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I'm sorry, Bishu. Adobe is a
I'm sorry, Bishu. Adobe is a free download I've found quite easy to download to my desktop. And coming from me that's saying something as I'm not very technically inclined.
Very very nice to hear your voice in the recitation :)
Got it Peter !!! Very very nice to hear your voice in the recitation and your imposing pic too :)
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Thank you very very much,
Thank you very very much, Bishu!! That's been my new thing: making poetry videos. :)
:)
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