Your Sweet Tender Smile

If we just sat together for a while

I'd search your soul and find your smile

You look so warm in your denim overalls

Pink socks and sneakers dangling from the wall

Rocking back and forth in fading light

Ever rolling playfully and dreaming of tonight

Long thick hair swaying and framing your face

In your girlish smile the years are erased

You leap to the ground and extend your arms

Dusk reflects off your necklace charm

You wrap a little child in your embrace

Pulling him close with no empty space

Dancing gently over hopscotch chalk marks

Watching with wonder the firefly sparks

I tenderly touch your shoulder

With my other hand on your waist

The ocean sparkles and grows colder

We sway as the Beach Boys CD plays

Vanilla Coke foaming in pitchers

Clusters of friends posing for pictures

Hot dogs and buns on barbecue grills

The air is warm and the wind is still

I look in your eyes so wide and delighted

Your laughter is sweet and so excited

With you I'm gentle as I can be

Like a porcelain doll I hold you gingerly

As we dance silhouetted against the water

I'm mindful that you're God's daughter

I like to walk with you in and out of arcades

Chewing steaming pretzels and sipping lemonade

Wearing friendship bracelets and novelty rings

The precious pleasure of hearing you sing

The plastic teddy bears you snap on to your hair

Whipping light sticks in the aromatic air

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem in 2002. It's a nostalgic summery portrait .

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    Wonderful really enjoyed

 

 

Wonderful really enjoyed your poem. A very good read.


 

 

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Thank you very very much!! :D

Thank you very very much!! :D

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brilliant

brilliant

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Thank you very very much,

Thank you very very much, Millyardo! :D

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Young love summed up

Young love summed up perfectly.  I love it.  You painted a picture of how you feel about this woman, and it's just pleasant to read.  Bravo!


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Thank you very very much,

Thank you very very much, Joarge! :)

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    A beautifull poem so

 

 

A beautifull poem so lovingly written and so sentimental. I liked how the small things in life please you and your detailed account of your intimate thoughts. I enjoyed reading this poem very much, lovely creative write the rhyming is wonderfull too.


 

 

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Thank you very much, A.

Thank you very much, A. Griffiths!! It means so very much coming from you. I so much enjoy your evocative portraits of childhood. :)

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Reading my poem in the wee

Reading my poem in the wee small hours of the morning.

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Sorry , I missed the video Peter

Sorry , I missed the video Peter.My PC displays a message "The Adobe flash Player or an HTML5 supported browser is required for video playback. Get the latest Flash Player.Learn more about upgrading to an HTML5 browser Frown


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I'm sorry, Bishu. Adobe is a

I'm sorry, Bishu. Adobe is a free download I've found quite easy to download to my desktop. And coming from me that's saying something as I'm not very technically inclined.

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Very very nice to hear your voice in the recitation :)

Got it Peter !!! Very very nice to hear your voice in the recitation and your imposing pic too :)


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Thank you very very much,

Thank you very very much, Bishu!! That's been my new thing: making poetry videos. :)

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:)

Laughing


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