Joys of which I've partaken and the purity I've plundered
Still remain in place as you lie awake with wonder
Though the stars depart don't hasten the dawn
These isolated hours with you to smile upon
Balance a colloused finger on your tender warm shoulder
Your smell shall always dwell and yearning glow and smolder
Gestures of affection most readily received
Though I'm content to lie in silence listening to you breathe
Your body taxed but now relaxed with skin smooth as wax
And unlike me you bear no mask to hide the cracks
Hormones seem to spill like marbles from a jar
Spread across the bed and scattered wide and far
Perfume looms loudly in the coolness of your room
Hair flying wildly which once was neatly groomed
A loving liquid whisper in your welcoming voice
My senses rejoice as I lick my lips moist
Then your tender press diffuses the stress
And your angel soft face comes to rest
Feeling the form of your mouth's graceful curve
As it's treating my nerves to gifts undeserved
With confident hands you caress my chest
Relieve my unrest while my mind is undressed
You reach and unleash the wants which lie dormant
With womanly touches you tame the torment
[poem:http://www.youtube.com/
[poem:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K64XpS7IBpk]
I totally enjoyed reading
I totally enjoyed reading this.
......(so many awesome phrases in there...descriptives so beautifully and creatively placed)
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thank you so much. I had
Thank you so much. I had posted it to Reddit and gotten a bunch of dislikes and a couple of negative comments which kind of shook my confidence [ Maybe I just need some thicker skin. ] so believe me when I say I'm thrilled by your comment. I just wanted to tackle a very sensual love poem. Thank you very very much. :D