If I Should Drink Myself To Death Tonight

Approaching the door with his peculiar gait

It was nine forty-three which for him was late

Weirdly whistling as he staggered about

Blue neon sign half the letters burnt out

Hung his coat on the hook nearly piercing the lining

Cannot bring himself to cook and this is finer dining

Winking at the bouncer who would race like a comet

The instant he spotted one droplet of vomit

Aware of the stares as he climbs the stool

He's suffered worse fools with their ridicule

Chatting up the college girls smling to be nice

Half-expecting him to spew some fatherly advice

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I started writing this tonight on my dinner break and then on the train ride home. I may continue it for it seems unfinished.

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nightlight1220's picture

I love your writing. This is

I love your writing. This is a good descriptive piece. I can see the whole event clearly.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Thank you very much. I work

Thank you very much. I work in a real college town so I'm often surrounded by people half my age and it makes me insecure sometimes thinking that they might see me as the 'old guy.' I feel like 'Mr. Awkward' sometimes. That was part of the inspiration for this.

jessie2376's picture

Love this ;)

Love this ;)

PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Thank you very very much. :)

Thank you very very much. :)