David With His Back To Us Disappears

The kids are doing somersaults

So jacked are they from chocolate malts

Yet I'm already winded from this waltz

Prepare to administer smelling salts

But where's my nephew David with his divided focus

Quietly divising clever ways to croak us

A pile of birthday parcels didn't interest him for long

And I failed to engage him in a game of ping pong

He breaks the big piñata releasing sugary spoils

Yet bothers not to touch nor taste the fruits of his toils

Makes us wonder why we waste a king's ransom

No bribe will entice him regardless of how handsome

For he is that peculiar boy who's never licked the spoon

You offer him a Lorna Dune and he retreats to his cocoon

Tossed and lost in a blizzard of confetti

Treats take on a bitter taste as arguments turn petty

Barely aware as he's hugged and kissed

Longing for the moment when he may be dismissed

And as one would gladly part with a painful cyst

I'd bury the burdensome blame for being the catalyst

His friends swarm forward and queue up for cake

While he makes sure the smallest are first to partake

And after a while someone shouts

Wondering about his whereabouts

 

 

 

 

 

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bishu's picture

Kids will be kids dear Peter the Poet

I could see David on his 2nd or 3rd birthday behaving as kids do normally. Cheers to kids. Nicely portrayed Smile


©bishu 

 

PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Thank you very much, Bishu. I

Thank you very much, Bishu. I always try to have each of my poems be like a detailed portrait. Thank you. :)

allets's picture

Sugar Highs

plus kid-composition equal lots of joy. I confess, I kid-watch in the park. They operate with innocent purpose and tend to ignore what is potentially harming or limb breaking. :D


 

 

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I love when little kids come

I love when little kids come into my CVS job. They get so excited over things  that I'm really jaded toward. I'll hear one say, "woooow, look at all the ice cream. Mmmmmm. Which one can I have?" And I say to myself, "they're right." :D