Unbeautiful

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Love

8-23-05





I want you to see me as beautiful



But I’m dieing for someone



To love me as me



And I’m not beautiful



I’m just another freckled



Converse wearing conformist



And I’m tired of being just me



I’m tired of being just like them



I want to be loved so badly



But I’m not pretty



I’m not skinny



I’m not fragile



I’m just another one



Of those unnoticed girls



Can’t someone love me



For what I’ve become

Author's Notes/Comments: 

btw the title is the end to the poem. I thought it would sound better to leave it unsaid, just b/c sometimes less is more.

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Dizzylemons's picture

You have a really good sense of drifting in this poem, i like the punctuation, where less is more xP clever x