4/10/02
You visited my dream last night
Again star of the play
In longing for the night
I was rushing through the day
You made the greatest actor
Your lines were right on cue
I want it a reality
So here’s what I’m going to do
I’m going to tell a secret
One that I’ve held dear
Although the thought of losing you
Has filled my heart with fear
I’m going to say I’m sorry
If you don’t feel the same
I know that you are perfect
Flooded with praise and fame
I understand I’m no one
At the bottom of the scale
The only thing I’m showered with
Are both stones and hail
No one’s ever loved me
You would be a first
It’s okay if you reject
My life could get no worse
Never downgrade yourself. Others tend to take you at your own self- evaluation. Your poem is very expressive, but be careful of self-fulfilling negative prophesy. Good writing.