Another Kind of Prayer

When injustice tangles the

lifeline of infant hopes,

I awaken to the ordinary

and suddenly leaves

are angelic feathers.

In the vaulted dreamworld

of the midnight sky

doubt is a stranger

I only knew in passing,

and in meadows of clouds

galloping across paradise

the mind and the rainwashed

air are one,

The wind, a living thing now,

I want to know personally;

It’s a door to the spirit land

I can almost pass through.

Almost.

I can’t quite touch the secrets

but I can sip unearthly nectar

while touring forests that

smell of feverish activity:

Life is the common thread throughout.



At the bottom of a naive

sky injustice shrinks to

a faintly buzzing pest,

Rage, to a waste of limited strength

in a limited life.

Stopping by the lake that spits

out light in torrents

I wonder if it’s wise to pray--

Should I just worship in a better way?

That way I learn from silence,

rather than my own words

which teach me little.

And if He wrote this epic

Of birth and death and mystery in between

then who am I to bark out noise

that muddles its wisdom

or wail about codes I cannot decipher

with cells built only for one life?

I’ll stay silent, yes,

and stare and please Him

with my wonder

till the earth



is small again--

a cluster of jewel tones

and souls

sharing the vastness,

so clear from this

point of view.





by Patricia Joan Jones

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem received the Guiding Light Award at The Golden Quill Poetry forum. An edited version was published in 'Letters from the Soul'.

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allets's picture

"jewel tones"

nice image. Soul catching - slc


 

 

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Thank you for that gorgeous

Thank you for that gorgeous reply. So sorry for my late response. I'm using my other account (patriciajj) now. So pleased you enjoyed one of my older works.

Robert C Millar's picture

Nice Poem

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I LIKE THIS POEM