A Silent Knowing

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There is so much
to be found in silence,

 

everything quiet has its
own life and appears infinite:
a tunnel to the beginning of
all things,
a tiara of knowing

and a love more delicious
than mortals ever knew.

 

It's 1969 again and I believe
all humans are gods
in the making.

 

The sea was every god:
wealth and pride
and Victorian clouds,
frilly waves humble at
my feet.

 

I almost drowned in
those waves,
but I never stopped
believing.

 

I could get used to
that demented freedom.

 

Lauded and adored
sanctuary between thoughts,
knowing all this is a
parody of home,
I'm flirting with hope.

 

Capture me, stallions,
shattering the priceless quiet,
take me to your lord,
your center,
my silence

and I can tour the
sable fits of galaxies
or burrow into the
quantum carnival
twinkling beneath
it all.

 

In youth you gave
me romance,

now give me life.

Give me everything
and all that is . . .
within.

 

Patricia Joan Jones

 

 

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J-C4113D's picture

What a poem!  Wow!  And the

What a poem!  Wow!  And the stanza that begins "capture me" is the centerpiece of this centerpiece poem.  What a great reading experience.


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Thank for kindly for reading

Thank for kindly for reading and leaving such thrilling feedback. It means so much. 

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You're welcome.  Sorry I have

You're welcome.  Sorry I have beenscarce, I am very ill right now.


J-Called

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So sorry to hear that. You're

So sorry to hear that. You're in my prayers. 

J-C4113D's picture

I take great comfort in that,

I take great comfort in that, and I appreciate your prayers very much.  Happy Easter!


J-Called

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I love it! my kinda words,

I love it! my kinda words, my kinda theme, my kinda of poem heck yeah this one is something special! Great work! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Incredible poem! You have s

Incredible poem! You have s true talent indeed.