When else would you be born
but in May . . .
when the morning whirrs
through your lungs and
says this is new
and not what you
expected,
and the joy you
stalked all winter
finally
wants you,
and the wind that just
ran off with your
hair is all your
best dreams,
unfolded,
shaken-out
and crisp against
your skin just
like before.
You are the unleashed
soul of springtime,
unquenchable ember of faith,
every polished strand
of rain:
crystal hum
that dares the soul
to drink,
dares to believe
shackles are only dreams.
Shadows never live too
long in springtime.
Light drinks from every
pool of darkness
in its path,
so you shine
always the strong one,
always the evening star
never sinking with
the drowning day;
where others see silhouettes
of armored trees lined
up for battle,
you see a cut-glass
sun,
dying glamorously
in the West:
your private rose,
crushed and fragrant
and blended with those
fantasies that don't
know how to
die.
Where else would you
be born but under the
forgiving stars
of May;
you learned to breathe
when the trees learned
to pray,
and the world gained a
new soul to love,
when love
was the first word
the earth learned,
when it
awakened in the
sequined arms of
springtime.
by Patricia Joan Jones
Easy to see why this poem won
Easy to see why this poem won an award. This is one of the best evocations of spring that I have ever read. What I particularly like about your poetry (and this is part of your always reliable consistency) is the way you personalize your cosmology, and bring it near, like a good friend, and not some impersonally theoretical observation(say, like Hubble's recession of galaxies). And this you bring to the level of a fine art. Like Bach's fugues, and themes and variations, you manage that very difficult effect of keeping the content fresh while presenting it with the skill you readers have (and this reader has) come to expect of the Patrician style. The very first line of Shakespeares that I learned (all of nine years old, from Eerie Magazine), "Age cannot wither, nor customer stale, her infinite variety" most definitely applies to you. There is a kind of comforting circularity that, at the an early stage of life I learned those words, and in this stage, perhaps my last go-around, I see them so perfectly applied in your poetry.
Starward
Why doesn't it surprise me
Why doesn't it surprise me that the poet was learning Shakespeare at nine?
Thank you so much for your validating analysis and appreciation of my style. Coming from a skilled wordcrafter, it means so much.
Thank you for that reply, and
Thank you for that reply, and for the compliment. Your poems have blessed my life in so many ways; and I am not alone in this. I know others are benefitting from your artistry as well.
Starward
Your poems are a blessing as
Your poems are a blessing as well. Many thanks.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Starward