Finally
I slipped free from the
vanity of day
and landed here:
another clean-carved horizon,
another apparition of moon,
another chiseled scowl
steaming through a falling sky
where it all begins
and ends,
and She's not giving up the secrets,
not for a handful of glowing dust
creaking down,
and certainly not for me,
little seeker, twisting
in questions,
only knowing there
is this . . .
and a body we never owned,
but certainly owns us—
lured us into believing it was
the killer of dreams
and lord of our nightmares:
fragile, seductive prison.
So we play along while light
presses against the windows of
of our raging: Let me in!
We rarely do.
I have a friend who is dying and I don't
know if I should say goodbye and pretend that
it's a serious thing to slip out of an iron suit
we imagine is all our grief and majesty,
ambition and stunning tragedy—
Yes, the dream wore sequins
and a paper crown. Quite the
trickster, this Game:
Look, over here, no, here and here,
see this sorrow,
believe this ending
before you wake up and say:
So that was it?
Under a spray of burning poems,
I take down your volume of
prehistoric heroes and
villains with beautiful names,
and think of how you will
try to finish their stories.
A laughing immortal in on the joke.
A vessel of secrets.
A body of light.
Patricia Joan Jones
God give Starward a
God give Starward a painless path and healing Thanks for letting us know
Thank you for your prayers
Thank you for your prayers and concern. You are a bright light in this community.
Everything you write is
Everything you write is meaningful, beautiful
Thank you! I've been very
Thank you! I've been very touched and enlightened by your work as well.
"fragile, seductive prison"
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Speaks to the mortality of flesh in an uncompromising declaration of ultimate truth we all as homo sapien must encounter. Your aproach to dying is couched in beautifully and delicately constructed imagery. Calming against a backdrop of attraction and rejection of inevitability. The poet sidesteps nothing. Death is a toughy for everyone, seccombee and survivors ask all the questions. God is waiting having been the uncaused cause - no not easy. Some of the what and many of the why inquiries are attempted answer here, excellently well. Each reading evokes personal and spiritual conumdrums, the writer's forte. Good work. A lovely dance done by life in death.
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That has to be one of the
That has to be one of the most profound and insightful reflections on my own reflections that I've ever had the honor of receiving. Poetry itself. Thank you for reading with such depth, interest and illumination. My heartfelt gratitude.
life has so many tragedies it
life has so many tragedies it makes you wonder who is in charge,a touching write pat
ron parrish
Always a pleasure when you
Always a pleasure when you stop by. Thank you for reading and relating to my expression.
my pleasure
my pleasure
ron parrish
Thank you for the prayers;
Thank you for the prayers; for the poem; for your friendship, and for your mentoring of this old, grumpy man. While my health continues to decline, you have helped my soul to soar, and you have reminded me of the importances in life that can be so easily neglected; and you neglect NONE of them, You helped me come to terms with issues that had burndened me for over forty years, and you have proven, again and again, that your Greatness is not just present in the magnificent Poetry you write, but also in your talent for making friendship a gift and not just an acquaintanceship.
Thank you so very much for this poem.
J-Called
Thank you for your deeply
Thank you for your deeply moving and beautifully expressed words of appreciation. Your encouragement has made all the difference.