The sea dreams of
the unknown,
and endlessly,
in every hissing wave,
gorged with the lifeblood
of the world,
swollen with pure living,
burning down
around my feet,
but not vanquished,
only resting for the next
adventure in light
and sapphire
and doom.
What if we are unstoppable fire
resting between spectacles?
What if we are as powerful
as we ever wanted
to be—
heirs to majesty
even while we beg and
pretend to be small?
A pale denim sky unravels
into its dark
destiny.
A gathering of stars
sprinkle down
and remember
faraway legends
when they make their
soft landing
on the water.
Now I too am the pulse of the sea.
I too am the invisible multitude.
I too am the music of darkness—
hum of unquenchable vastness.
And just what if our
true state
is magnificence,
our true form, anything
we can imagine and
our lives are spread
across oceans
we separate into
centuries and eons
and now,
while we ride waves
of a love
we could never endure
in a breakable body?
Then would we
finally cherish
this tiny capsule of
living,
or even remember
the whispering fear
that sounded
so real
just a moment ago?
Patricia Joan Jones
I Bow Down
Your perfect poetry is the force in literature I have always longed to know.
It is a blessing to bask in another manifestation of your omnipotent rhetoric.
A tsunami named Patricia rolls and casts her cleanse in whitewater waves!
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Thank you for your very
Thank you for your very encouraging feedback. It means so much.
Falling stars notwithstanding
"...our true form, anything/we can imagine..." Sounds like a recurrent sci-fi theme. Lovely verse. ~S~
Thank you kindly for your
Thank you kindly for your intelligent perspective and support.
WOW
This is absolutley beautiful, I just started to read some of your poems. I will defiantly be back to read more.
Thank you for stopping by and
Thank you for stopping by and leaving such thrilling feedback. I visited your site and enjoyed your poems as well.
Poems like this one, and all
Poems like this one, and all of yours others, help us to "cherish this tiny capsule of living," which, I think, is the first purpose of poetry; and the second, which you also do at a level that none other here can achieve, is to name the stars and express the cosmos. With each poem you post, you show us what true poetry's real vocation is, and what it has been, and what it will be.
J-Called
Thank you! You validated my
Thank you! You validated my goal in such an expressive and luminous way. I'm forever grateful.
I love how each posted poem
I love how each posted poem fits into, and extends, the vision that inspires them; but, also, each poem tell us more about you, and how you bring your vision and cosmic understanding among us. Your poems are a cosmological textbook, a compositional textbook, and a textbook about poetic greatness. They operate on so many levels, from the vastly cosmic to the intensely personal. I don't think I have ever seen such tremendous greatness, not even from Stevens himself.
J-Called
Wow, what an incredible vote
Wow, what an incredible vote of confidence from a poet whose work I've come to admire greatly. A huge thank you!
a time capsule of life with
a time capsule of life with all it`s splendor,,maybe we are alive in our dreams in another dimension
ron parrish
Thank you for that profound
Thank you for that profound and sublime comment. It lit up my day.