The night sky
could almost kill me
with its weight of
of blindness and
flame—
so much time and
space and
erupting stillness
falling to a
world never ready
for real secrets,
each star an epoch
encased in
crackling ice,
each an ancient death
too beautiful
to interpret—
one way to be immortal.
I must have been born
a thousand times
in whirling moments
stranded in that
wild and hissing
multitude,
and still, some say
this is all
there is . . .
such captivity
to live in only
what can be seen.
The ant on his planet
of mountains and monsters
believes this is the world.
Also the fish in his
glassy dream.
Also the private cyclone
of the hummingbird—
in its frantic galaxy
it has only
the color of sweetness
to live for.
Also humanity,
believing we are
these bodies we
explore in,
so convinced this
magnificent and
terrifying cage around us
is all we can touch
and good enough.
So where is this vastness,
not beyond,
but within,
and everything . . .
and so much more
than we ever imagined?
Just a turn of
a thought,
a silk thread
of a prayer,
a dusting of something
once believed
and forgotten,
and here it is:
the door, the silence,
the Light, the bliss,
God's hand.
Walk through
and greet
the universe you are.
Patricia Joan Jones
Relativity As A Theme
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when all the suns die
and the universe goes quiet
and dark, light will own
no gravity well and some
new temporal timpany
will evolve.
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What an amazing answer to my
What an amazing answer to my ruminations! A gorgeous and spontaneous poem. Thank you for your feedback.
she slid into the silence of
she slid into the silence
of solitude
to remember the one she once knew
ron parrish
Some beautiful wordcrafting,
Some beautiful wordcrafting, dear poet. Thank you for stopping by.
you`re welcome,,working on a
you`re welcome,,working on a poem
ron parrish
That glimmer of eloquence
That glimmer of eloquence could stand alone as a fine work. Looking forward to reading more if you decide to expand it.
shed a tear half way and
shed a tear half way and couldn't finish. Can't afford to cry right now
Thank you for stopping by and
Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a moving comment.
I sit in wonder, amazed at
I sit in wonder, amazed at the beauty, and insight of your writing. Another treasure to be book marked, another lesson learned, and another smile born of your talent. Thank you for posting.
I'm so uplifted and honored
I'm so uplifted and honored by your eloquent feedback. My deepest gratitude.
beautiful! Freedom inspiring
beautiful! Freedom inspiring other dimensional, raising conciousness and awareness. I thoroughly resinated and enjoyed the artistry and concept of this poem! Excellent! Best blessings SS x
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you! Your insightful
Thank you! Your insightful and inspiring comments mean so much. You made my day.
and we are part of that
and we are part of that universe,his creation
the night sky is a t v screen,we are part of it but most don`t know
ron parrish
A very profound and
A very profound and enlightened observation. I love the way you expressed this Truth.
you`re welcome
you`re welcome
ron parrish
You are like an astronomer,
You are like an astronomer, focusing the wide end of the telescope's barrel, which then brings the vision of the cosmos to the very personal eyepiece of the lens---the way this poem proceeds from the cosmic to the very personal conclusion. Image after image lift the reader to this peak on which you, the Poet, having already arrive, tell the reader, "All this is also yours."
J-Called
Thank you for completely
Thank you for completely grasping my intent and for such beautiful insights. Deeply appreciate it.