You were almost there:
in a place without fear
before your slippery now
snapped back into
yesterdays and tomorrows
and all that ferocious bliss
dashed away
like a glimpse of a fox
clothed in autumn—
you're sure you saw it
before it plunged into a
drizzle of darkness
between the trees,
or like a love song
God wrote
and then you forgot
because it was a love
too pure to drink,
too lavish to be believed,
too fierce to be endured,
while following our
farcical scripts so far
from the temple of
everything
that truly matters . . .
But see how the field
of Queen Anne's lace breathes
in foaming rapture,
and without questions—
just living well
for a moment
while annihilating
us like fire—
so much power in softness!
And what, I think, it is
saying is:
just find
the weightless space
where faith is at least
not impossible
and meet yourself there,
knowing you are not a vagrant
in this blizzard of stones,
and although you are here,
you are there,
always traveling,
yet always home.
Patricia Joan Jones
' dashed away like a glimpse
'
dashed away
like a glimpse of a fox
clothed in autumn—' a beautiful image
May they all escape
the foxhunters...
'or like a love song
God wrote
and then you forgot
because it was a love
too pure to drink,
too lavish to be believed,
too fierce to be endured,'
Sublime
Most compassionate intuitive
and creative lady, I pray God
showers you with constant bliss.
Thank you kindly for your
Thank you kindly for your breathtaking comment, dear poet.
memories as fading sunlight
memories as fading sunlight into the night
ron parrish
Thank you for your wise
Thank you for your wise insights. I appreciate you stopping by.
my pleasure pat
my pleasure pat
ron parrish
What's My Line?
R U a nun?
Thank you for stopping by and
Far from it! Thank you for stopping by and making me smile today. Always a pleasure to see you.
Like the stars themselves,
Like the stars themselves, your innate brilliance never fails to manifest in another great poem. All of your hallmarks are present in this poem, and, as always, its style is as inimitable and profound as ever. When scholars discuss your work and attempt to rank it, they are going to have a mighty hard time---because yours poems, and this new one, occupy the highest level of quality, and they occupy it equally.
J-Called
Thank you so much. That was
Thank you so much. That was rocket fuel for my morale. Could never thank you enough . . .
Nor can I ever thank you
Nor can I ever thank you enough for your poems, and their towering greatness. But I do feel sorry for future scholars who might try to rank them. I expect doctoral dissertations will be written about your poetry someday; and all those literature graduate students are going to know that I predicted this, tee-hee.
J-Called
I'm deeply moved and humbled
I'm deeply moved and humbled by your confidence in my work. Too many thank-you's to count . . .
Investors bet on
Investors bet on futures---oil futures, crop futures, I have even heard of pork futures. But I am betting, with not a dime to my name, on Patriciajj poems futures. I remember, at school, reading about Samuel French Morse's often expressed belief in the recognition that Wallace Stevens' poems would bring. He had to wait a bit for Eliot's star to set, and then people began to realize that Stevens was the superior poet. Now, he is an industry for the academics, and a refreshing oasis for those who truly love poetry. Your work will follow a similar, but faster, curve, as you do not have to worry about Old Possum's star. I know of scholars who have envied Sam Morse's perceptive belief. And, futute scholars can envy me that I got to watch you build the great collection.
J-Called
Your support is a lifeline.
Your support is a lifeline. Whatever happens, Heaven will remember that you were a light in the darkness, an inspiration to a friend. God bless you.
Despite the possible medical
Despite the possible medical shadows ahead of me, your words will certainly bless me now and during that time.
J-Called