A Soft Ascent

You were almost there:

in a place without fear

before your slippery now

snapped back into

yesterdays and tomorrows

and all that ferocious bliss

dashed away

like a glimpse of a fox

clothed in autumn—

you're sure you saw it

before it plunged into a

drizzle of darkness

between the trees,

 

or like a love song 

God wrote

and then you forgot

because it was a love

too pure to drink,

too lavish to be believed,

too fierce to be endured,

 

while following our 

farcical scripts so far

from the temple of

everything 

that truly matters . . .

 

But see how the field

of Queen Anne's lace breathes

in foaming rapture,

and without questions—

just living well

for a moment

while annihilating

us like fire—

so much power in softness!

 

And what, I think, it is

saying is: 

just find

the weightless space 

where faith is at least 

not impossible 

and meet yourself there,

 

knowing you are not a vagrant

in this blizzard of stones,

 

and although you are here,

you are there,

always traveling,

yet always home.

 

Patricia Joan Jones

 

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saiom's picture

' dashed away like a glimpse

'

dashed away

like a glimpse of a fox

clothed in autumn—'  a beautiful image

May they all escape

the foxhunters...

 

'or like a love song 

God wrote

and then you forgot

because it was a love

too pure to drink,

too lavish to be believed,

too fierce to be endured,'

Sublime

 

Most compassionate intuitive

and creative lady, I pray God

showers you with constant bliss.

 



 

 

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Thank you kindly for your

Thank you kindly for your breathtaking comment, dear poet. 

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memories as fading sunlight

memories as fading sunlight into the night


ron parrish

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Thank you for your wise

Thank you for your wise insights. I appreciate you stopping by. 

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my pleasure pat

my pleasure pat


ron parrish

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What's My Line?

R U a nun?


 

 

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Thank you for stopping by and

Far from it! Thank you for stopping by and making me smile today. Always a pleasure to see you. 

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Like the stars themselves,

Like the stars themselves, your innate brilliance never fails to manifest in another great poem.  All of your hallmarks are present in this poem, and, as always, its style is as inimitable and profound as ever.  When scholars discuss your work and attempt to rank it, they are going to have a mighty hard time---because yours poems, and this new one, occupy the highest level of quality, and they occupy it equally.


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Thank you so much. That was

Thank you so much. That was rocket fuel for my morale. Could never thank you enough . . .

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Nor can I ever thank you

Nor can I ever thank you enough for your poems, and their towering greatness.  But I do feel sorry for future scholars who might try to rank them.  I expect doctoral dissertations will be written about your poetry someday; and all those literature graduate students are going to know that I predicted this, tee-hee.


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I'm deeply moved and humbled

I'm deeply moved and humbled by your confidence in my work. Too many thank-you's to count . . .

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Investors bet on

Investors bet on futures---oil futures, crop futures, I have even heard of pork futures.  But I am betting, with not a dime to my name, on Patriciajj poems futures.  I remember, at school, reading about Samuel French Morse's often expressed belief in the recognition that Wallace Stevens' poems would bring.  He had to wait a bit for Eliot's star to set, and then people began to realize that Stevens was the superior poet.  Now, he is an industry for the academics, and a refreshing oasis for those who truly love poetry.  Your work will follow a similar, but faster, curve, as you do not have to worry about Old Possum's star.  I know of scholars who have envied Sam Morse's perceptive belief.  And, futute scholars can envy me that I got to watch you build the great collection.


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Your support is a lifeline.

Your support is a lifeline. Whatever happens, Heaven will remember that you were a light in the darkness, an inspiration to a friend. God bless you. 

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Despite the possible medical

Despite the possible medical shadows ahead of me, your words will certainly bless me now and during that time.


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