I did not listen to my heart

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You were right I did not listen to my heart
each day I wake up thinking about it regretted of my eternal silence
to hide what was in my mind...what was inside drowned forever in misery I'm pleased even without holding you in my arms.
I am always lost in your beatiful eyes
I've never seen such a beatiful woman
a woman tenderly content my desire is not for you to love me
but to see you smiling and in good hands.
he will go where I could not he will reach for your lips for your hugs
and you will burn his heart with your beauty and inspire him like you did with me
and I will see it and pretend a smile
I will shed a tear in my loneliness
all for not telling you that I love you and I still do.

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Elfy's picture

Why dont you tell her that

Why dont you tell her that you love her?? i can tell how much you feel for her, your emotions where wonderfullly placed, and your details where strong.
Your words where so personal. I loved this. It is beautifull. Your heart is a strong thing filled with so many emotions ,the strongest one is love. Many people ignore their hearts, and they shouldnt. It is the one thing, that usally will lead them to what they want most. Listen to your heart, it wont lead you wrong. Loved them poem, keep writing! :)


-Elfy*

Passionhispanic's picture

The poem is quite old

Its quite old I wrote it last year and thanks I appreciate it.

Elfy's picture

lol np

lol np


-Elfy*