"Captain's Painting"

Captain's Painting



Painted in transparent trails

tonguebrushed in sweet tail

I set sail,

Steering the flesh of her canvas, I

parted her velvet sea

took a turn on her tide

all the way down,

in drip drool slide.

Surfing her coast, I

swam her ocean

bobbed up and down

in puffy pink

deep in sink,

of saturated sex colours.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Brian, excellent piece on an intimate time! Your title caught me because my guys nickname is Cap or Captain,because he was in special forces. Some may find your pieces topic lude,I don't ,I find it's done in good taste and descriptively wonderful metaphors.....