Captain's Painting
Painted in transparent trails
tonguebrushed in sweet tail
I set sail,
Steering the flesh of her canvas, I
parted her velvet sea
took a turn on her tide
all the way down,
in drip drool slide.
Surfing her coast, I
swam her ocean
bobbed up and down
in puffy pink
deep in sink,
of saturated sex colours.
Brian, excellent piece on an intimate time! Your title caught me because my guys nickname is Cap or Captain,because he was in special forces. Some may find your pieces topic lude,I don't ,I find it's done in good taste and descriptively wonderful metaphors.....