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i have asked the stars

to glitter at your skylight

to bring forth a dazzle

parallel to that of the sun

so that when night ensues

to raze your eyes

and pervade your mind

with foreign thoughts



my stars will knead your eyes

like a petal to a butterfly














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written 9/8/03

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©8 September 2003 - 2:22pm — pangan_l_l
27 February 2004 - 6:07am — poetvg
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i like this
piece because
it is truly
speacil to me .

20 January 2004 - 7:29am — poetvg
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i love this
poem beautiful