Tanka--STARY STARY NIGHT

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my eyes see snippets

in the thick of the night,

nostrils inhaling the charm of

the wind as I muse the stars

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written 5/7/03

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Sandy Cowan's picture

The title "Stary Stary night" conjures up visions of Van Gogh due to the pop song of the same name. the man would have painted the wind for you, probably in deep blue swirls, so you could have seen it as well as inhaled it.

Your piece stands up very well however you aproach it.

Sandy