Cinquian--OohHhHhH!

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he is

down on his knees

ready to sow his seeds

sun's beam still hiding under the

thick shrubs







written 3/21/2003

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I miss my husband....

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Sandy Cowan's picture

A fine piece with much of the meaning tied up not just in the title but in the Authors comments.

Sandy

louie's picture

i missed my wife too.

freakinPoet's picture

great! very well written. a very short but complete expression of emotions :)