Would you give your hands to be tied down?
Without showing any gripe or showdown
Would you let your spirit be drawn to the pit?
When you know you can do something about it
There’re too many things that stands as a hindrance
Too many wants to fetter you as soon as they see a chance
But you can unchain your hands just be very vigilant
You can paint your life in different deals
Deals that will accent your principles and views
You don’t need my opinion on which side to turn
All you have to do is be really concern and seize that turn
HI
I liked this piece a lot!! Great job, very well done!!
I especially liked the emotions that you were conveying,
I know how you feel.
Great job again.
That is another poem that touched me. Great work. Keep the faith.
Ozjan Yeshar