nothing could be better
than just seat in a corner
ponder the times gone by
or count the drop of rains
falling stridently off the sky
this isn’t new to me
this too isn’t a dejavu
adamant to be glimpsed
a deity must be playing
playing my mind’s eye
the images of the pristine
a xanadu in disguise
swiftly I recall
those treasured moments
how I wish captured
to my taut embrace
the heat of the sunset
that was burning me tan
shrubberies as tall as a gnome
where I toyed hide and sick
those were the days
of utter geek
as I held the pillow
inside my arm, I held it tight
to splash some more semblance
and wishing not to wake up
for those were my past
kept in a luggage
like a location map
humming of birds
dozes me off
waves of salty water
teases me off
i will hug this forever
until such time
something would come up
and bring me back
to where I want
forever sleeping
in the vast space
I can't say much about this other than "I loved it" so much feeling and giving me a visualisation of being there, you write well, or should I say "you write how I like to read poetry" :)
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