I SAW STARS

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2002 Poetry

dancing in the crowd

giving all my vigor

catching your mind

with my stylish pivots

i hold the floor

like no other

sweats spurting

like a shower

to have my steps

capture your ogel

i wiggled and twirled

in sporadic catchy bound

and in my frantic to be found

i slipped and fell to the ground

swiftly I saw stars on my crown

shimmering hues of indigo abound

craving to knock me down

yet with composed posture

i managed to take a bow

and returned to my seat

as if nothing happened








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Hayles Comet's picture

Awesome.

Michele Colangelo's picture

I loved this poem! The imagery you used was amazing. This was an absolutely wonderful poem :)