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Apologize Only if Absolutely Necessary
Apologize, don't ask for permission
make that your mission
if you need to
do what you gotta do
sometimes the means justifies the end
if it does do not pretend
to need to say you are sorry
or need to worry
bout anything at all
stand tall, don't fall
you gave your all
maybe need to stall
till they get it
if not yet
have patience and persist
know common sense does exist
just takes awhile to get there sometimes
ok running out of rhymes
so I gotta go
on with the show
ya know?
is it suppose to be "no" before "need" in this line "to need to say you are sorry...i like the parts were there were end ryhmes that rhyme with "all", that's my fav part...one thing that i think that threw off the messae n strenght u develop is the ending...other than that i liek the message it's very ummm lost the word lol, but i like the message in here, very powerful...i admire how u can write to make it relate to many readers n their thinking...well written pam