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Tension
Too much tension
Too much distress
How did I
Get into this mess
Can't take it much longer
Not getting any stronger
Too much tension
Too much distress
How did I
Get into this mess
Can't take it much longer
Not getting any stronger
I don't think you should add any more to this poem because I think it says a lot as it stands, I don't think it needs to say anymore. Excellent poem.
suggestion describe why you feel this way and what you think you can do about it
yes add more it is good but sounds like something should be following initial words here