We can ask for advice and not take it
We can take advice but not make it
We know in our hearts what we want to do
But helps when it is said by you too
IF YOU THINK THE WAY I DO
Validation helps me
But do what I was gonna do anyway
So what’s the point in asking
When I am always multi-tasking
And doing what I was gonna do anyway
Maybe I will listen someday
There is much to learn to my dismay
But if I’ve enlightened you
Maybe this was the thing to do
Author's Notes/Comments:
This poem was inspired by....Today's Quote

Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't.
-Erica Jong
Man, another connection I need to share just got today, at least a week or so after posting this, also makes sense ....
When we ask for advice, we are usually looking for an accomplice.
Charles Varlet Marquis de La
I totally agree with both observations and that is what this poem is based on before and after...one inspired me and one verified my inspiration I guess...agree, disagree? Comments please?
hey..this is great!! I really enjoyed reading it. I have added a couple of poems since the last time you commented and was wondering if you could do me the favor of critiquing them.. Thanks in advance:)
I like this, it really got me thinking.
very unique and original structure, seems to flow very smoothly....4 stars!
great write Pam and so true
hah, very TRUE! lol i like the two very first line just the way it's put that makes it so catchy, flows so smoothly too, keep it up pam