LAST NIGHT

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JOURNAL # 41

'Last Night'
I had a startling dream
six distant moons spoke to me
in each their separate languages
more startlingly  enough
I understood the entire conversation
of each one perfectly
as their sun shone upon the planet
nearest to the fourth lavender moon
serenading me
with a song about the glory of the
cosmos
I thought to myself this must be some
si-fi lover's dream
asteroid shaped like orchestral instruments
offered their musical assistance
to my creative lament
there in that celestial composition
while from such strange
abstractionist dream
my soul wrote an entire symphony
and to the heavens it plays on
just as it was meant
a soul stirring never blurring ballad
so poignantly rapturous
and ever glorifying to God
the cosmos, his backyard
even when so very hollow now
to you, my reader
is my account of this event
I offer up my disjointed memory
for inspection, consideration
or perhaps even some grand
sort of comment..........
(August 8, 2014 1030am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

about a very vivid yet beguiling dream I had.

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Respected Ms Shinywingedpoetess this does deserve a grand

Respected Ms Shinywingedpoetess this does deserve a grand comment. Your description rose from the mundane & projected  beyond this tiny dust called earth and brought the stupendous beauty of the ever-mysterious cosmos right to my PC screen .Very nice imagery ~BM~


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ah brother bishu see!!!!!!!!

I got my wish. I got my grand comment. Thank you so much for that........... Sincerely, Melissa