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A KNIFE IS PAIN

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JOURNAL # 41

mighty smudge
his tear upon her blouse
a mere speck of love
so painfully discarded
now if only her guilt
would be not so porous
as well
self damnation makes
breathing feel nearly impossible
'A Knife Is Pain'
that is slow to stop stabbing............
(July 14, 2014 950am)

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I read several less is more poems here on PP and came up with this one of my own. I was minimally I suppose Inspired I could say. Anyway, I hope you enjoy!

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©14 July 2014 - 1:55pm — palewingedpoetess
14 July 2014 - 8:26pm — MisterSuperstar
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good reading, would you mind

good reading, would you mind critiquing me *if that's how it's spelt* i've been out of the game for a while and looking to get back into writing. Steve :)

15 July 2014 - 4:30pm — palewingedpoetess
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sure , I'd love to............

and I believe you spelled critiquing right!