POUR FAVOR

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JOURNAL # 41
there are places in
my sad memories 
where my heart
has forgotten to beat
where the emptiness
has prevailed
and logic has felt
far too much defeat
sadly this vacuum
has become my reality
hollow spirit
hear my pitiful pleas
life revive
and resurrect
my aching core
bring my love
even more strongly
back to me
'Pour Favor'............
(Nov. 4, 2013 506am)
 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

was in a terrible state of withdrawl missing my love.

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nightlight1220's picture

I am sure you have deep and

I am sure you have deep and meaningful relationship where you have no blind pulled down between the windows of your souls. Melissa, I love your talent. I aspire to be so good at writing.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

palewingedpoetess's picture

Ah so sweet of you to say...........

thank you poetic nightlight. You made even my heart smile upon reading that. I've been at poetry a very long time so just keep writing. It started out mostly me wanting to clean up some inner mess I felt I had inside and at some point that mess got cleaned up and I moved out of that phase and just began writing more so of the beauty all around me. It was a glorious metamorphasis . You have a lot to look forward to as I see you have been quite a prolific little bee with 405 poems already up and posted so my best advice is just keep writing when the words stir inside then get up and make some savory poetic stew for all the world to taste. I have not been writing so much this last month or so due to several wonderful life changes and being so busy and all but I never fret, the words will come whenever they feel like showing up and then they will be like typhoon Hayain only more so constructive rather than destructive! Once again thank you so much for your complimentary tone and if you wish to discuss poetry feel free to private message me and we can share influences if you like, pitfalls and our most grand endeavors. Sincerely, M.........

nightlight1220's picture

Thank you. And I will

Thank you. And I will certainly be post messaging you sometime in the future. I feel so grateful to have such an offer, please know I am honored. Be well. Be beautiful....beautiful. 

NL1220

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "