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marble statue
of warm woman
on a wire
me without a pen
chide me on that
another day
remember me
in your prayers
I'm the one blowing
gentle kisses
at your bowed head
inhale my scent as you rise
from your 'Absolution'
dare me not to smile at you
knowingly............
(July 31, 2012 704am)

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Inspired by fellow post poems poet Emmenay's poem, 'Yellow Noon'.........
his though more brief mine be more powerful. Sticks tongue out at Emmenay............... (smiles like a pleased five year old)

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last updated 2 August 2012 - 12:54pm
©31 July 2012 - 11:05am — palewingedpoetess
1 August 2012 - 5:41pm — emmenay
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Wow!

Wow! Graciousness can somersault too...as this poem, written in response to my haiku poem, proves. At such times silence is golden...

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

4 July 2014 - 12:33pm — palewingedpoetess
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I never cease to amaze eh?

What can I say other than well it is part of my feminine charm........ get use to it! Sincerely, M.