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ALL MY LOVE ALLOWED (SHAKESPEARIAN)
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JOURNAL # 41 and does thy not guess
that mine own breath
of thought deeply shivers
as moon and stars and sun
so brightly blessed
swirls high daily and nightly
over rocks, wet embankments
and rivers
be not just the bearer of
a quiet, clever caress
thou is but a bow for which
my own arrow quivers
hurling a mighty spear
all its own
of such sweetly tender
trespass
as to no other lover known
could it dare detour to clasp
such hopeful penetrating wound
that holds to thee so ever fast
eternally a brand
of mine love's more romantic repast
to polish your own dear heart
with flesh from such a supple shore
arrow to target returned at last
fulfilling the ancient legends
of love's finest lore
in all my so beloved abundant excuses
I can give you at least that
until we are allowed better more...........
(Sept. 22, 2011 351pm)
Awesome indeed!
Need I say more to thee? This is sheer poetic brilliance at its best...a gift which poetesses like you possess...All praise to God who blessed thee with such sheer talent. Smiles and smiles...
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
Bows ever so politely..............
Why thank you Sir poet........ So coolly typed and expressed, Why,even butter would not dare to melt in your mouth I venture to bet............ What can I say , I was um shall we say, voluptuously inspired.............again I bow most humbly. Your praise is more precious to me than priceless gems my dear sir..........Sincerely, one of those um possessing poetesses no less............ laughs gloriously!
Thank you so much
Thank you so much for your words of praise. I am posting this poem on my Poetry Page in Facebook. May God bless you more and more...
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
The link to my Poetry page in Facebook
http://www.facebook.com/pages/EMMENAYS-POETRY-CLUB/105060572862928
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
Okay, I saw your Emmenay's Poetry Club............
for a second there it sounded like some posh resort! ......... Thank you though truly for honoring my poem by putting it on your site. Is much appreciated. I'm sure my little poem will be happy there. Oh, and thanks for that lovely song. I understood it completely. It's SUBTLE ( grins) message did not go unnoticed by me...............Sincerely um one of those possessing poetesses I suppose grins...................