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JOURNAL # 37

hold steady
gallant soul
the mark of time
touches not your brow
you stand steady
face to the sun
smiling beautifully
for the wind that
whispers through your
carefully chosen clothes
in the arms of love
we hold one spectacular partner
at a time
ultra lovingly
the breaking dawn dallies to agree with me.......
(April 6, 2010 801am)

Author's Notes/Comments:

this poem is part of my poetic reply and critique of fellow poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem Daphne Forever.